they´re good
just some pro tips:
you don´t really need to make the plot story into the 2 parts, only in one is enought, and the final text part was a little difficult to read ! and the elevator part at last, i found weird the way that he danced/moved so much to smoke
drunk mode for the win !
i thought drunk people could barely move in a horizontal line and they had they motor cordenation affected
and the rest:
everything is so immediate and fast, a little hard to understand and follow the happenings, this is not so bad, but also not so awesome, its regular ! its your style.....hardstyle !!!!
merry christmas and a happy new year